Yuneec ST10 Plus Joystick Replacement

How should they remove the battery component door? Make sure to tell how, not just to do something. Also, why is battery capitalized?

Make sure to use commas after introductory phrases (e.g., to disconnect the battery from the remote, grab).

The action part of the photo is a little obscured. I would retake this picture to have the action more highlighted. Also, add additional pictures to make the flipbook style iFixit prefers.

Note that iFixit prefers you not use the metal spudger unless necessary. If it is necessary here, be sure to indicate that you need to use force. If you don’t need force, change the tool. Also, you use a lot of “remove,” which doesn’t have a clear action associated. How can they remove the side grips? Be sure to change the verb or add modifiers.

I also think the shots are from the wrong perspective. For example, in the first picture, if you took it from the side, it would be clearer what you’re doing, instead of foregrounding your hand.

Note that directions should be written as commands. You’ve also misused the information bullet here. Integrate the tool into the step. Also, you need to include measurements for the screws.

Check all steps for appropriate screw measurements, per iFixit requirements.

What are you asking the user to do?

I think you’re overusing cautions and other special bullets. If you just write the steps clearly, you won’t have to add extra steps.

After this step, I’m not marking the point about special bullets and condensing any longer. Be sure to check carefully and apply throughout your guides.

How do the pieces come apart?

Be sure to use the terms iFixit used for tools, and be consistent. Make sure to use special bullets appropriately.

For me, the photo is not helpful here for completing this step. Add some flipbook-style action shots to make the action clear, and make the directions clear as well.